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I agree totally with 5-0 here. That blur is well....awfull. Good concept but almost to simple. Since teens will be looking at this site, i think making it a bit falshier and eye poping. To simple for the group at which you are trying to atracte (spelling?). The alignment is also off and rather distracting.
My thoughts....
In one of your previous posts you mentioned a type of spider web layout. I think you should go with it. Have a center point and link each part with some sort of creative line to that center point. However i would keep each line simlar not to distract from the over all idea. Each link brings you to some sort of other site each with its own unique design. I have this great picture in my head, but as always, cant find the words for it nor a means to create it.... bah! Obviously you have gotten ahold of Yuneek. He should be able to help a bunch. I also think you should take a closer look to the many other teen sites out there ( Im pretty sure people in previous posts linked a few) again and try and bring some of their ideas into yours. I noticed the color scheme is similar just doesnt have that certain teeny (<-- is that a word even) feel about it.
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Last edited by Stiker; 08-06-2004 at 05:20 AM..
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