Beauty Above

EvO · 06-28-2004

here's a pic i've been working on, the sunset picture was taken by a friend then i added to it (obviously :P)
anyway here it is:
(smaller view incase anyone doesn't want to wait for the full view to load, although full view is recommended :P)
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/8466736/

and full view:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/8466736/

edit: updated

**Man1c M0g** · 06-28-2004

You added to it? I'd have never guessed!

Seriously, though, its a good piccie. I'd just adjust the stars a little though - they seem to fade in a little too quickly, and that ruins the overall effect IMO.

EvO · 06-28-2004

what do you mean by fade in to quickly? :/ you mean it needs more stars lower down?

**Man1c M0g** · 06-28-2004

Yeah, and you need fewer of the nebula-style clouds too... I think they over-do the piece a little...

muffins · 06-28-2004

wow very impressive piece. i love it :]

EvO · 06-29-2004

well here's the updated version:
full view:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/8466736/

small view:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/8466736/

i got rid of some of the other brushing and put more effort into creating more a nebula type effect in the center of the space area, also made the rings more visible on the planet and tried moving a few stars further down not to sure how well that worked though

**Man1c M0g** · 06-29-2004

Ahhhh, much better! You could perhaps do with toning down or erasing that light flare in the top right hand corner though - it draws the eye a little heavily. Apart from that its pukka! Nice work man!

EvO · 06-29-2004

heh thanks

so the nebula looks ok/good? (its just im getting multiple responses about it which is getting confusing :P ) and hmm yeah i guess i could try toning down that lens flare i don't want to completely remove it though seen as it's suppose to be acting kind of like a light source for the other area's and the other planet.