party poster in progress

drolleke · 11-29-2006

I have to make a poster for a party of a friend of me, and I could use some suggestions =)
I already got something, some brushes and vectors.
It will be printed on orange paper, so I made the background orange...

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9980/afichlowkm1.jpg
yer I kno, its a link, and its completely safe.. (its kinda big =p even on quality 1 >.< )

and just a quick question: is double posting allowed over here?

**tamlin** · 11-29-2006

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Originally Posted by drolleke

and just a quick question: is double posting allowed over here?

What do you mean by "double posting"? If you mean posting the same message in more than one forum, then I would say that, although it isn't expressly forbidden, it will not be looked upon kindly and may be viewed by some as spam (which is definitely not welcome!).

drolleke · 11-29-2006

a nvm about the question.

I attached it now.

Chamenas · 11-29-2006

The innuendo is cute, the images are fine, but it's nothing without any content.

stiney51 · 11-29-2006

If you plan on printing it on orange paper, I would design it without the background (you may have already done this).

Is there anything that will be added to this? It's a good start, but kind of barren.

drolleke · 11-29-2006

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Originally Posted by stiney51

If you plan on printing it on orange paper, I would design it without the background (you may have already done this).

Is there anything that will be added to this? It's a good start, but kind of barren.

yes ofcourse there will be added something :P
date, place, dj's, and stuff..

I just did the orange thing so I could see how the printed version would be.

stiney51 · 11-29-2006

Sorry. didn't want to assume anything.

Taipan · 12-01-2006

I like it's retro feel and love the colours, the only thing that is doing my nut in is the far right sun ray because it's thinner than the rest. I'd either move the darker one over to act as a frame, or move it left so the orange/blank one is larger.

This might not be a design error on your part and purely a psychological one on mine.

stiney51 · 12-01-2006

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Originally Posted by Taipan

the only thing that is doing my nut in is the far right sun ray because it's thinner than the rest. I'd either move the darker one over to act as a frame, or move it left so the orange/blank one is larger.

Funny, I was looking at the dark lines as the sun ray and the light ones as the background. Everyone sees things differently I guess.

drolleke · 12-01-2006

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Originally Posted by Taipan

I like it's retro feel and love the colours, the only thing that is doing my nut in is the far right sun ray because it's thinner than the rest. I'd either move the darker one over to act as a frame, or move it left so the orange/blank one is larger.

This might not be a design error on your part and purely a psychological one on mine.

hmm yea maybe I'll move the black a bit (its the black that are vectors ;-) )

kingpug · 12-03-2006

I like that, I don't like the text though and I would try adding a bit more to it but it's still nice so far.

Copticmike · 12-10-2006

I like it and it would look better with more added to it, Remember a painting(or piece of art) is never done, it could always be worked on