Old 07-24-2006   #1 (permalink)
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well im building my portofolio and ithink it looks a bit wel i can't find the words(litaraly the wordbook is right here)

so please take a look at it(it's not complete yet) and tell me what you think
o and the help of sancho i think must be credited because he helped me a lot with the html/ javascript part of it....

o,and clicking the orange/ blue button next to the header will switch between the two themes

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maybe someone could also help me with the gallery(the background and things are already working but the galery isn't )
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well i'm not really good at websites so i can't very much of a help... but i can say the site, imagining it in a wekk or two, will look good. right now it's a bit 'in progress' so can't really say, but you should find another way of putting the text in there... other than that it's allaround good, for what it is now and looking abit into the future. keep it up, don't quit =D
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It's a great start, but it would be even better if you had your own domain name. Also, don't use frames if you don't have to.
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Lookin' good.

Jacorre is right about frames, people with physically challenging conditions might have trouble navigating.

One more item. Your portfolio is a very important element. It could be the very first contact a client has with you. Ask someone to help you with the spelling and phrasing. I always have someone look at my text and make certain my spelling and sentence structure is accurate. This is a piece of advice all of us should use.
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Looking over your site, I think you have a good direction, but I think there are some major points you need to reconsider and remember when doing web design.

The very first things that caught my attention on your pages, were the various background glyphs. I like the idea of creating a similar feel between each page, but using a significant detail to determine difference. The problem here is that it is poorly executed. The main problem is that the glyphs are far too distracting. I am not sure on the actual statistics, but the majority of your viewers are not going to stay at your site for much over 5 minutes. Giving each page a ceiling of about 30 seconds depending on how much content is available. So when serving content, you need it to be clear, concise, and easily viewable (image or text). When going to a page on your site, the viewer is required to stop, and concentrate on reading the text and seperating it from the background. Most users that come across your site, will find this not worth the effort and will either leave your site or continue to some other section.

The other problem with the large glyph, is that it make the menu far more difficult to read. The buttons blend in to the rest of the page and are not easily decipherable as links. The same problem occurs in the header. It does not have noticeable features that will allow it to stand out.

Overall you need to get your core content seperated from your site design, and make it easy for your veiwers to access what they want.

Also as another note, your message abotu Javascript links to java.com. There is a large difference here Javascript != Java. Javascript is supported in almost all of the current major browsers, but users may have it turned off.

Java is the mutli-platform programming language currently being developed by Sun MicroSystems. Installing Java will not activate Javascript in the clients browser, as far as I know, it will only installe the Java Virtual Machine to run Java applications.
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yes i know about the difference between java and javascript......it was like a test html version wich had some errors and wrong lines in it, and i forgot the wrong lines when i was uploading... well im happy its still a test version because if i look here i will have a lot of hard work to do thanx to everyone for helping my building my site.....when im done with improving i will re-upload it and then give you a "call"
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It's a great start, but it would be even better if you had your own domain name. Also, don't use frames if you don't have to.

Frames - I agree, if you need to use something like that try <div></div> layers. Also as you get better, or if you are interested in learning, try out php. that will certainly help you out if you are planning on making your website big. I lalso agree it is good to get a webdomain name because it just says you paid to get where you are. but again that all depends on what you know and how far you are along in the process. Just do what feels right.
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