averill.co.nz pro

[scrowler]

www.averill.co.nz

besides the copyright being too small, the lack of content and the tiny 1px gap in the advertising frame, what ya think? lol

[ConceptualMind]

I'll list a few things for you to fix:

The content boxes are a little jagged.
Too much stroke around the letters near the bottom copyright.
The abstract to the upper left corner is a bit weird. The coloring and the little * near it.
The dotted background doesn't really match you're layout. Perhaps make something different?

That's about it. It's looking pretty good. Only thing is, it looks almost like a PHPNuke site.

[scrowler]

thanks for that, the copyright and the frame text have been updated, i don't see what you mean about the frame top bit, more dpi maybe? and the php nuke thing? hehe

[Evdawg]

I find the red a bit offensive.

[scrowler]

in what way?

[scrowler]

ive updated it a bit, moved the ads to the top where the gap was and ive written a little poll to go where the ads were. comments plz? shot