A playaround, comments are welcome

[Zoltan]

This is actually my first art displayed on a public forum, so go easy on me
But feel free to comment my work (all kind of comments are welcome).
To me its like one of those ink pictures; what you see depends on the viewer.

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d1...stilecopy2.jpg


(This image has been reduced by photobucket. The original image is 500x500 pix and brighter.)

[shinmoteuchi]

Ok... Beige flames and text. Not bad :P

[henkeball]

The text destroys the image, imo.
Remove the text, or make it more interesting.

Good job on the "flames". Looks pleasing.

[Zoltan]

Well i really cant claim the title of an proffesional Grafics designer

i merely uses some of my free time, playing around in photoshop and looking fore some usefull tutorial. But hey, im here and i am eager to learn

Well anyway; Gone with the text. Thx 4 the fast reply

[Sakuya`]

You /could/ always try to add a focal point to make things more interesting.

[CCDiane]

Originally Posted by henkeball

The text destroys the image, imo.
Remove the text, or make it more interesting.

Good job on the "flames". Looks pleasing.

Yeah, i agree.
The text is not very clear (or easy to read).
And i don't very much like the color of the text glow.
But anyway...ur main point is the effect/texture...
U said the actual image is brighter...then it would probably b a nicer picture.
^_^ nice smoky effect . And y don't u try other color theme?