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well it's ok, for a 13 year old I can even say it's great work.
But I don't like too much use of standard blending options and easy brushwork.
I miss some finishing touch here and there so you can become a great one if you go on with it nicely done for your age!
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I definately consider Nauzer's comments. They are quite spot on. Try to get away from over-using the layer styles and blending options, and possibly try some new techniques (the grunge/abstract brushing is getting very stale in my opinion). Also try to follow a piece through to the end. Those examples show a good start, but have some fine touches that could have made them much better.

Try, after you think you have finished something, save it and put it away for a few days or a week. Then open it back up a look it over, you will most likely pick up things you missed and will come out with much nicer looking final pieces.
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Thanks for the critique, I'll think of it when designing my next thing.
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