Envisage Rose

ConceptualMind · 10-28-2003

Hiya,

I decided to take a try at making an abstract image, a rose in particular.

It's viewable here:
http://www.dark2k1.com/s2f/envisage.jpg

Critique, comment, give suggestions. It's all good.

Order · 10-28-2003

a little dark.. but not bad.. looks like the rose has been maginified a little too much.. lol

ConceptualMind · 10-28-2003

Yeah I gotta adjust the colors on my monitor. When I make something on APS7 (adobe photoshop 7), it looks a lot different when I save it.

I hate that. Grrr....

Oh well. It was my first try at making an abstract. You think it's too large?

Order · 10-28-2003

a little cropping could be done.. and the colors may be the settings in PS7..

**Man1c M0g** · 10-29-2003

Hey, not bad! Try decreasing the size and making the colours a bit more vivid though. Large images usually work best when there is lots going on, but on a singular theme like yours a smaller image would be optimal...

ConceptualMind · 10-29-2003

Who knows, I might expand on the idea as time goes on.

Thanks for the comment. My first abstract piece.

LimitLess · 10-29-2003

ew, just kidding not bad man , what programs did u use?

ConceptualMind · 10-29-2003

Photoshop 7.0

Evdawg · 10-29-2003

Leave the colours alone!

LOL

I like the colours, exept i think you should do something with the text, change the font, colour, position, etc.

ConceptualMind · 10-30-2003

Yeah I gotta agree with you on the font. I think I'll leave it for now since I'm really concentrating on my layout. I'd like to have it out by Thanksgiving.

I'm nearly 75% done with it. I might post it? Should I? I'd like to have feedback.

I have the base of the layout done. Right now I'm adding details to it.

After that I gotta do the dreaded work of coding it. I might just use the code Photoshop gives you, however, I was thinking of making it xhtml compliant. That would take work, I've never done that.

So the question remains... should I post a preview of my layout here or not?

Young Spartan · 10-30-2003

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Originally posted by SuBjEcT2fAiLuRe
Yeah I gotta agree with you on the font. I think I'll leave it for now since I'm really concentrating on my layout. I'd like to have it out by Thanksgiving.

I'm nearly 75% done with it. I might post it? Should I? I'd like to have feedback.

I have the base of the layout done. Right now I'm adding details to it.

After that I gotta do the dreaded work of coding it. I might just use the code Photoshop gives you, however, I was thinking of making it xhtml compliant. That would take work, I've never done that.

So the question remains... should I post a preview of my layout here or not?

YES! Post it, that will be awesome. Anyway, for the image.. its too dark for me to really see it.. go with more vibrant colors whenever you do it next or work on it.

ConceptualMind · 10-30-2003

Yeah I wanted it to be a little dark. I guess some monitors can't handle it.

Anyways, I'll be posting it soon. I wanna work on it a little first.

Young Spartan · 10-30-2003

Quote:

Originally posted by SuBjEcT2fAiLuRe
Yeah I wanted it to be a little dark. I guess some monitors can't handle it.

Anyways, I'll be posting it soon. I wanna work on it a little first.

I just got a new monitor, but its used.. still new to me. My old one was really messed up. anyway, I'm hoping for a new computer for X-Mas..

Can't wait to se the design either!

**Man1c M0g** · 10-31-2003

I want a n00 monitor myself, but LCD displays aren't too wonderful with games, and a comparable size to my current CRT would cost a fortune...

Order · 10-31-2003

Quote:

Originally posted by Man1c M0g
I want a n00 monitor myself, but LCD displays aren't too wonderful with games, and a comparable size to my current CRT would cost a fortune...

I am going to need a new monitor soon.. I currently have a Dell Trinitron 17".. however there are two lines of pixels that don't work anymore.. oh.. well time to save money..