5-0 vs. Yuneek battle entry 3 Remxi 1 and 2

[Young Spartan]

I made remix's of my 3rd battle entry vs. 5-0, here is the first..

[Young Spartan]

Remix #2

[Milkdrop]

both look pretty good. Glad you could let me remix that original entry.

I'll do it tomorrow just to busy now.

[ConceptualMind]

Not half bad. The background is a little too Filter > Render > Cloud-ish.

[Young Spartan]

Originally posted by SuBjEcT2fAiLuRe
Not half bad. The background is a little too Filter > Render > Cloud-ish.

lol, nice read. I didn't think it looked too bad...

[Milkdrop]

im putting in a 3d render into this peice because it may make it look cooler.

i didnt have the time to put this render into your abstract. i may do it tomorrow just hold on.

[ConceptualMind]

Marc, the edges are really jagged. You need to smoothen them out. One last thing, the little protrusion on the left side is a solid color, it doesn't look like it fits in right.

Other than that, nice work. I like it.