W.I.P - We Are Making Out Future

Nyo · 11-12-2005

http://www.hostfiles.org/files/20051112013228_wip.jpg

photoshop + cinema 4d

the sphere rappresents the perfection, and it will be like the sphere my future, which is now rappresents by the present with the abscract of the background.

any suggests to improve it? it's for a battle on another forum

Nyo · 11-16-2005

Err... Nothing? :P Really Nothing???

GoldNetX · 11-16-2005

It's pretty good, could make some improvements. But that is why it's a WIP.

I would suggest possibly changing the outside of the orb. It definately needs some more blending, the edges really stick out.

The colors are ok, but a little too much contrast is used. The contrast is hig enough that it overwhelms the viewers eyes, and there isn't anything the soften the impact. I would personally experiment with some other colors and brush blending to make it more viewer friendly.

rappresents = represents* 8)

**Bub** · 11-16-2005

I think the font stands out too much. Try to change the font color/opacity to make it blend better.

I like the picture pretty good though.

Nyo · 11-16-2005

http://www.hostfiles.org/files/20051112064456_wip2.jpg

Tnx for the suggests... I changed the fonts and I've tried to do better the orbs, how is it now? Anyway, WIP is a part of the title... I don't know how to tell you, 'cause it's a lil bit complicate for my english. Someday I will explain you

blkfire · 11-17-2005

WOW realy nice work!!! can you sow what you do in photoshop

kidwikid · 11-20-2005

It looks nice there Nyo...

Here's just a few things you could try to see how it looks:

* Perhaps see how a faint glow or something looks behind the blue orb
* What does the image look like without the diagonal lines on top of it?
* You could perhaps work in the text into a techy looking design - like the
ones you have in the background

Those are just some ideas that came to mind

Nyo · 11-20-2005

Mmm... I'm thinking about that... Maybe i will do... Thanks kidwikid

ParaSnake · 11-20-2005

I agree with Nyo about the text,but about the orb,is it too dark in the center,the whole image is beautiful but the orb dig a big hole in the center,do you have anyway to avoid that problem?
Forgive me if my idea was useless

Aysha · 11-21-2005

I FIND IT UNBELIEVABLE!!

REALLY PRO!!!!