Old 09-13-2005   #1 (permalink)
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So this is a flyer I worked on for about 4 hours while writing emails and crusing the internet. What do you guys think?( Just so you know It's for a church thing. So I tried to keep it simple and I wanted it to match the website, which is also under progress.)
Try this . thanks in advance for your input

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It looks ok, but the design and layout is more akin to a website than a flyer. There is nothing that grabs your attention in the first glance and you'd actually have to read it to see that its about gaming (the controller is far too understated). Most people, unfortunately, do not read flyers unless there is something in there that interests them, so you should bring out the gaming aspect much more to attract the attention of your potential audience.
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Try it again. I made many a few changes to the flyer. So what do you think now? btw thanks for the suggestions mog. Youre always a help
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Much better. It still looks a lot like a website, but at least its a lot busier now. You might want to change the text size on the lower left though. Its very very very hard to read!
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Ok will do. I still don't know what fonts I am going to use for that box. I had designed it to look like the website I made for them, so that is kind of the point.thanks for the outer opinion mog. I had needed that.
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