Old 12-14-2003   #1 (permalink)
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website on GM foods

Well for school I have to do a website on GM foods.

Ive researched and reseached and reasearched and ive designed a layout, and its due monday so i have to write the content and upload it all (with working links )

But anyways what do you think of the layout, some constructive critisism would be helpful

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oh the URL is http://www.gmhealth.tk
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Well, I would suggest using pictures foods, possibly some that is known to be gm... just a thought...
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Few things you should change:

Center the layout, it's too small to be on the left.
Get rid of the overly large pixel font (header).
Get rid of the ">" and use a list instead?

Also, you say,"Welcome to Genetically Modified Foods. This website will answer the question: " I suggest changing it to "Welcome to Genetically Modificed Foods. This website will answer the following questions:"

Other than that I like it. Very nice. Good work.
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thanks for the help guys.

the reason i used a ">" is that cell spacing wasnt working for some reason but i fixed it now.

Thanks you s2f, "the following quesitons' sounds much more scientific ,

what do you reccomend i replace the header with?

And i'll center it too, thanks.

Just finishing the content now, it turned out better than i expected
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No problem Evdawg.

If you can, make a header with images of GM foods. Or perhaps use some neat looking text effects to spice up the text in photoshop. It would look better than the large pixel fonts.
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Originally posted by SuBjEcT2fAiLuRe
No problem Evdawg.

If you can, make a header with images of GM foods. Or perhaps use some neat looking text effects to spice up the text in photoshop. It would look better than the large pixel fonts.
The pics of GM Foods was my idea... poser
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Yeah yeah. He likes to listen to me though lol.
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Pretty nice man, nice job. I don't like the header font either but otherwise, pretty clean.
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Hey! It's updated. Very nice Evdawg. I'd clean up the edges in Photoshop if you had time, other than that good work. I like the outcome.
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