hmm... What do you guys think?

Order · 11-19-2003

this is an idea for a layout of mine, I figured all this plastic and metal is getting to boring, so I decided to go a little old fashioned..

If I get good reviews, this design will (depending on when I can sit down and work on it) become to the first official design. The reason I switched from my other ones, is because in my stupidy and ignorance, did not save psd's of them...

ConceptualMind · 11-19-2003

I like the concept of the look your going for, however, I don't like that particular layout.

It seems a little too artificial. The idea is great but the overall design isn't too appealing. Also, the font sticks out too much.

With a little more practice and effort I think it'll turn out really nice though.

Evdawg · 11-19-2003

The border is way too thick. And either get rid of the border or the page edge wrinkles (those white spots).

Work on this a little bit and I think it'll turn out good, youve got a good concept but keep tyring different things on it.

Order · 11-20-2003

Appriciate the comments, that was only a draft, so I will be redoing it several times before it is finalized

ConceptualMind · 11-20-2003

The idea is good, you just need to make the image a little realistic.

inimitabLe · 11-21-2003

I agree, it looks to artificial. Make it so that it's "ruffled" at certain areas to get rid of the perfect, artifial, straight look. Maybe have the edges ripped or burnt?

Just like using construction paper, crumbling it for an hour and burning off the sides =].

Order · 11-21-2003

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Originally posted by inimitabLe
I agree, it looks to artificial. Make it so that it's "ruffled" at certain areas to get rid of the perfect, artifial, straight look. Maybe have the edges ripped or burnt?

Just like using construction paper, crumbling it for an hour and burning off the sides =].

Yes, I am working on that right now.. it is looking better, but still hours away from completion..

ConceptualMind · 11-21-2003

Show some pictures of your progress?

Order · 11-22-2003

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Originally posted by SuBjEcT2fAiLuRe
Show some pictures of your progress?

I will, they are on my windows os, i am in redhat.. so i cannot access them right now..

ConceptualMind · 11-22-2003

Alright, when you can post them!

Order · 11-22-2003

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Originally posted by SuBjEcT2fAiLuRe
Alright, when you can post them!

next time i go into windows

.. which is most likely when i get alsa working on this thing

BTW: alsa is a sound driver system for linux, and is somewhat tempermental

ConceptualMind · 11-22-2003

Digital, how long do you think it will take? I really want to see. *anxious, crosses fingers and hopes he says tomorrow*

Order · 11-22-2003

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Originally posted by SuBjEcT2fAiLuRe
Digital, how long do you think it will take? I really want to see. *anxious, crosses fingers and hopes he says tomorrow*

Hmm... *looks at a neurotic S2F*... possibly tomorrow, not much has changed except some fonts, and a burnt corner

ConceptualMind · 11-22-2003

lol

I really want to see it. I like the concept, I want to see your progress and the end result.

Order · 11-22-2003

S2F: Here it is, not much has changed, and i cant seem to get the edges to look natural.. any ideas