Dudes... try to keep it clean, will ya? You're now personally attacking him, not criticizing (?) his sites.
Although I gotta admit there are some major flaws in his own site... If you work with flash you at least gotta make a vector logo or make a pixel logo that has the size you want... NEVER RESIZE A PIXEL LOGO!!!! It gets blocky and ugly.
And I believe you used your entire font collection of that lil'intro of yours. It's just confusing and it shows that you haven't defined your own style yet, how are you supposed to give the client what he wants then?
And indeed.... If you publish a site... make sure it is finished. In your flash site all of the submenu's don't work. And in the HTML site when you click the 'APS client' you are redirected to the index page... You'll have to fix that for sure.
It also looks like you put the HTML design together in stages... It doesn't 'work' well with eachother. A lot of cut-offs and just going on to an ad or something. You also designed the site for a res larger than 1280x960... You should definitly be able to put all this content in a smaller site suited for all resolutions. You gotta keep in account that most companies still run their machines at 1024x768 ( or even 800x600!).
There are some more tips I want to give you, but I think 5-0 covered most of them.
If someone gives you c&c... read, understand, and DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT!!! Don't go bitching at the person that gave you some pointers... Although I gotta admit 5-0 was a bit harsh. But that doesn't give you the reason to 'attack' the guy in person. He never said he had a killer site... you don't see Rembrandt making any sites(sort of speak)... yet still he is a graphic artist, so is 5-0. So let his site be and concentrate more on your own and try to improve (some of) the things we pointed out.
Now it's time for a cigaret... you kept my hands busy for a while, but for now I'm gonna let it rest.
Greetz,
Malb