Doomsday:on Mars. A Doom 3 machinima

[NEOD101]

Ok so recently I got involved as a camera man/voice actor in this project with a couple of friends to make a machinima using Doom 3 called Doomsday: on Mars(DoM).
This post is partially an advertisement(because we're currently hosting on a farely unknown website and therefor not a lot of people know about it) but mainly I'm just looking for some advise on how to make a good machinima.

Any advise would be greatly appreciated.

P.S. Our current site is http://www.wadaholic.d3-unlimited.co...sday_index.php

[NEOD101]

Episode 1 is out! Get it here!

[Oblio_Starr]

Wow, uh...

It's short, and kinda funny, but some of the voice acting in the beginning needs work. It's pretty well done, but kinda pointless. I'd make it longer. All this is just my opinion of course.

[NEOD101]

Thanks for the input. It's kind of just a pilot episode. We were gonna have a couple more bits in it but we cut them out because they were just unfunny/pointless/repetative.
By the voice acting at the start do you mean the 2 random marines at the very start?

P.S. None of us has ever made a machinima before or done voice acting(as far as I know).

[unleash]

it's indeed very short and the storyline i think should have some work. The voice actings are really strange and with that i'm pointing on the random marines in the begin.
but i think the rest is pretty amazing, the graphics i think are wonderfull(on low resolution) so tell me when the next episode is finished

[baxterboy]

i found the beggining amusing but the rest was a bit wierd for my liking, but yuh good work, if thats just an initial test run type thing cant wait to see the rest