Old 03-18-2005   #16 (permalink)
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The first thing that stuck out at me was the blatant (oooh! There's that word again! ) use of Sony's speakers. I'd strongly suggest drawing your own, or giving credit to Best Buy for use of their copyrighted image.

And I second the comment on padding around your content.
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I drop that total car amp stereo design and just started over and i think i did a way better job this time please tell me what you think :yes:
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i am not a php guru so i really ment to say that those are just snippets for php. and its not a big deal arguing about it.
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I like the new layout much better than the previous one. The design seems fairly clean and crisp. Couple points that could be better.

1. Main text on the news page seems a little bit too wide. Try putting some padding on the sides.
2. The links on the gray background with pink rollover need the underline removed.
3. When scrolling down the grey bar on the grey background becomes un-aligned.
4. Down at the bottom of the page is a small white bar. Possibly the result of not putting a background color on that section.
5. The items on the Tutorials and Downloads sections could use some left and top padding.
6. Don't really like the splash page, edges of the red look a little choppy and cut-off.

Overall I like the design. Could definately be better with some more work. From the looks of it the page isn't based on a php templating type system. Just as a possible thought, it may be easier to manage the pages using somethign like that. But just a personal preference.

edit: Forgot to say, this is just looking at it using the Firefox browser. I didn't look at it on any others.
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Obvious scanline overusage. Make them fade into the logo more instead of taking over. Id dispose of the line backgrounds too if i were you. Over then that i like the site. Nice usage of css.

BTW: Im viewing from IE, noticed no errors.
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Well i only used the scanlines in the bg of the banner thats about it :P and thanks for telling me no errors im happy about that.
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just another note on the matter of your tutorials. i dont want to seem derogatory or interrigative, but your tutorials aren't so much tutorials as again; code snippets...

out of the 3 html tutorials you have, this one is the only one that is actually a tutorial, and it's bordering on the edge...

this one and this one give me the impression that you have just thrown together some 20 second content to fill space, let's look at the word tutorial.
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a tutor is somebody who teaches a subject to somebody else, or a group of people. a tutorial is like an article that will teach somebody about something. your examples, including this one and this one do not explain anything, somebody comes to your website to learn PHP and they see "easy, upload forms" so they think hmm, maybe i can learn how to upload things! they go into your tutorial, and all they see is "cut and paste this here and that there". that doesn't teach them anything, and on another note, that upload code won't even work! nowhere have you told the user that they must first create the folder to upload into, and then chmod it to 777, because otherwise they get some nice little PHP errors.

you have instructed the user and cut and paste that html code, which you haven't bothered to put a linebreak in where the next instruction is, so they cut and paste "<input type="submit" value="Upload!"> 2) Create a new file and copy the below code and save it as upload.php" and the second step appears next to their button, what do they do now? they might even not see the instruction and cut and paste the PHP code too...

the two html tutorials you have (not including the background sound one) are the same, they just provide some code but don't explain what it's doing. what is an iframe? what is css? what does that css code you gave them even do? you really do need to work on them to actually make them tutorials... and i'm sure that you have the knowledge to be able to do it, so why not take some of the time you spend advertising and put it into making your tutorials better? heck, you haven't even bothered to give your tutorials a page title or any text formatting, i even saw one of them that said "sgihgoiwehtoiehn" or something. not very appealing.

i dont know if your css code you exampled would work or not, but you are missing a whole lot of semi-colons that would definately prevent it from validating, and once again, the user will come along, put all that code into a css file thinking "hmm, what will it even do?" then they run their script and its exactly the same... "fat lot that did". explain how to attach the stylesheet to (x)html documents. your iframe code wouldn't work either, you specify all this positioning, if you are just going to give them code for an iframe, don't position it aswell, and if you are leaving the name attribute empty, why confuse them by even putting it there? btw the reason it wouldnt work is because you've got style="blah blahblah... and no end ", so it runs on into the next few html attributes...

i don't even know if half of your photoshop tutorials are actually tutorials... "make a canvas like this, do this filter, do this and this and you're finished". how about explaining what you are doing along the way? (i know you didnt write most of the photoshop tutorials so this isn't directed at you personally).

this isn't really constructive criticism on your layout, but more towards your content. once again, this isn't meant to be derogatory or seem like im "flaming" you, i'm just pointing out some things that might help you get more traffic...

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Yes I know, I am not really good in explaining, which I am going to do in my upcoming tutorials. As for the tutorial with the eohewowehtowehwtw title that isn’t my tutorial. Its by archangel and I couldn’t direct it to that specific tutorial on there website because its in an iframe. And also for the tutorials I haven’t worked on them in a while. I have been really concentrated on the site design and look more then the tutorials. Thank you for the big essay lmao.

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Well how about the tuts now im sure there well descriptive as the way i put them on the forums. Umm scrowler im not sure if you would but would you like to join the forums if not thats ok then. Just wanting to know. Trust me if you do post your tuts i will not take credit for them. I just forgot to put your name when transferring to vbulletin from my old phpbb database.
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nope. i haven't the slightest interest in doing that
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OK guys i decide to go with another design for subound.com and i think this one is way better and the best iv done in a hi tech catagory. As for the old one im going to put it up for downloads. Please tell me what you think. D

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Do you ever just stick with a design? *shrug*
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Lol well this one is the actual layout so. no more changes
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