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Old 04-25-2008   #3 (permalink)
MoodsR4Cattle
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The colors do jump! You have a lot of unused space just under the logo that could be utilized better, I think. The image with the three people is very crowded at the bottom and the smaller text is a little too hard to read. Might be better to shift the people up and put the smaller text below them.

You should consider a more interesting font for your "Easy Saver Pages". It's a bit flat. Maybe you could design it so that it looks more like a logo than just text.
"Mega Sale Carnival" isn't centered quite right ... looks off. And could be moved into a blank area.

If you decide to use something from Dreamstime or iStockphoto be sure to read their license agreement ... there are stipulations to how many you can print.

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