I like the font you picked!
But I think that the text is too dark, and maybe a misplaced....Maybe if you type it like this:
Quote:
Not al that glitters,
is gold...
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than you can put it at the left side of the eyes. Than the only problem is the darkness....maybe a bit lighter blue, but not blue than the eyes. That way the eyes should stand out a more than the text...
And maybe you can ad sparkles, I really like sparkles. Maybe around the eyes, to make them stand out more...!!xD
anyway good luck!