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Originally Posted by stiney51
A few comments that might improve it: extend the film strip so it continues off the page and cuts part of the faces off the outside images, it'll add a bit of a sense of limitless ideas and large numbers of people. Also perhaps move the strip in from the left and continue the curtain past in to the edge of the invitation. I'd suggest also breaking the "additonal entertainment" so the examples are below it, but that's even more minor.
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Hey, thanks stiney: those all sound like good suggestions!