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I like the gradient mask idea, the lines do add to the piece, but they kind of make it a bit too har to read, especiall with nearly all of the type being light on a darker background.
Apart from the font issue, the alignment of the text throws things off a bit and is distracting. If you're going to justify everything left then you might was to stick to a common alignment of those items.
I like the background and feel of the piece though, simplify the font selection a little and maybe bump the text size down a bit and the poster would pop out that much more.
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