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agentxi · 04-25-2007

I find your background is fighting with your subject. I would suggest playing with your composition lines and colors, to help bring your subject to the attention of the viewer, right now my eyes don't know what to look at.

Now artistically, I find your female subject in good proportions, I would like to see the other wing somewheres, unless she's supposed to have a single wing.

Besides that a very SOLID start

keep it up, looking forward to your updates!

-agentxi-

04-25-2007	#3 (permalink)
agentxi photoshop ninja Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Red Deer - ish, Alberta Posts: 557	I find your background is fighting with your subject. I would suggest playing with your composition lines and colors, to help bring your subject to the attention of the viewer, right now my eyes don't know what to look at. Now artistically, I find your female subject in good proportions, I would like to see the other wing somewheres, unless she's supposed to have a single wing. Besides that a very SOLID start keep it up, looking forward to your updates! -agentxi- __________________ when evil is afoot, and you don't have any arms, you've gotta use your head. And when evil is ahead and you're behind, you've gotta do the legwork. But when you can't get a leg up, you gotta be hip. You gotta keep your chin up, and kick some-...