Just had a thought...
the email address is
Theessenceofrain@hotmail.com ... I wonder if it would present better as
TheEssenceOfRain@hotmail.com ...
I believe, but can't guarantee, that Hotmail e-mail's are no longer case sensitive.
It just makes it a little easier for someone to remember your email address if the can make sense of what it says....
Just a tip.
Mike.
P.S. Your last example looks good... for consistency, i might make the upper 2 swirls overlap the edge like the lower one... even if they have to be made larger...