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Old 11-24-2006   #6 (permalink)
Tamlin
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The "light swirl" version definitely looks better than the "no swirl" one (too plain), but I think the problem with the swirls is that their pattern is a bit too "formal", if you know what I mean, which seems at odds with the informality of the font. Maybe if you increased the size of the swirl or broke up the rigid pattern a bit? Something like the attached? (That's only very rough to give you an idea)
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