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I like the concept, although my first thought was the center area is too dark and heavy. I see the reasoning though.
The text doesn't fit the image though. At least in how i was reading into this; on one hand you have the dark anger of what I assume is a breakup or betrayal, then you have a tagline that portrays acceptance. The two kind of clash (which is actually not bad). I would add a little to drive home the accpetence and moving on part. Maybe ghost a silouette in the background on the right of someone looking upward, perhaps even walking away.
As for it being too busy, perhaps for a wallpaper, but it's still a nice piece.
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