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Old 05-03-2006   #5 (permalink)
stiney51
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Good Start

I think the header is way too big. You can portray the same artistic message and feel in less than half the space. The other issue I see is that you need some more information/flair to the first page in your website. If you hope to entice people to look deeper into the website you need to wow them right off the bat.

Try condensing the news portion and add direct links with more content on the website homepage (some of the resources you suggest are in the website).

Note the way Biorust does it. They wow you from the start with examples and information.

Good start though, I likke the simplicity of the colors.
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